3 commits - en_US/Printing.xml

Paul W. Frields pfrields at fedoraproject.org
Sat Nov 1 23:38:37 UTC 2008


 en_US/Printing.xml |   11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 37ef30691d1aa3ae135f857acf20d9bfc7928628
Author: Paul W. Frields <paul at salma.internal.frields.org>
Date:   Sat Nov 1 19:38:14 2008 -0400

    Sync with wiki content

diff --git a/en_US/Printing.xml b/en_US/Printing.xml
index f7f0423..27b103f 100644
--- a/en_US/Printing.xml
+++ b/en_US/Printing.xml
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 	proceed.</para>
     </listitem><listitem>
       <para> The print status dialog (for GTK+) gives more feedback
-	about the status of printers, for example printers that are out
+	about the status of printers.  For example, printers that are out
 	of paper show a small warning emblem on their icon. Paused
 	printers also show an emblem, and printers that are rejecting
 	jobs are shown as grayed-out to signify they are not


commit f8e5c482a78fc135ecf71a065362cf361151c67d
Author: Paul W. Frields <paul at salma.internal.frields.org>
Date:   Sat Nov 1 19:37:18 2008 -0400

    Sync with wiki content

diff --git a/en_US/Printing.xml b/en_US/Printing.xml
index 4c9aeb7..f7f0423 100644
--- a/en_US/Printing.xml
+++ b/en_US/Printing.xml
@@ -33,9 +33,10 @@
 	selected.</para>
     </listitem><listitem>
       <para> The job monitoring tool displays a message when a job has
-	failed. If the printer has been stopped as a result, this is
-	shown in the message. A <guibutton>Diagnose</guibutton> button
-	starts the trouble-shooter.</para>
+      failed. The message indicates whether the printer has been
+      stopped as a result shown in the message. A
+      <guibutton>Diagnose</guibutton> button starts the
+      trouble-shooter.</para>
     </listitem><listitem>
       <para> The job monitoring tool now performs proxy authentication.
 	A submitted job that requires authentication on the CUPS


commit 058384b5afb68f26d51dcb19ccfeb7880cf5b76f
Author: Paul W. Frields <paul at salma.internal.frields.org>
Date:   Sat Nov 1 19:35:42 2008 -0400

    Sync with wiki content

diff --git a/en_US/Printing.xml b/en_US/Printing.xml
index 2e93b7a..4c9aeb7 100644
--- a/en_US/Printing.xml
+++ b/en_US/Printing.xml
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
     </listitem><listitem>
       <para> The job monitoring tool now performs proxy authentication.
 	A submitted job that requires authentication on the CUPS
-	back-end now displays an authentication dialog so the job can
+	backend now displays an authentication dialog so the job can
 	proceed.</para>
     </listitem><listitem>
       <para> The print status dialog (for GTK+) gives more feedback





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