4 commits - en_US/adminoptions.xml en_US/beginninginstallation.xml en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
David Nalley
ke4qqq at fedoraproject.org
Fri Nov 21 16:38:24 UTC 2008
en_US/adminoptions.xml | 8 ++++----
en_US/beginninginstallation.xml | 14 +++++++++-----
en_US/diskpartitioning.xml | 7 ++++---
3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
New commits:
commit 322bbcbadc87c795548f5de1038afe2521752cda
Author: David Nalley <david at gnsa.us>
Date: Fri Nov 21 11:36:23 2008 -0500
added content to deal with bug 455656
diff --git a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
index 84c9953..214413b 100644
--- a/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
+++ b/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml
@@ -17,11 +17,15 @@
<note>
<title>Aborting the Installation</title>
<para>
- To abort the installation process at any time before the
- <guilabel>Installing Packages</guilabel> screen, either press
- <keycombo><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Del</keycap></keycombo>
- or power off the computer with the power switch. &FED; makes no
- changes to your computer until package installation begins.
+ To abort the installation, either press <keycombo><keycap>Ctrl
+ </keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>Del</keycap></keycombo>
+ or power off your computer with the power switch. You may
+ abort the installation process without consequence at any time
+ prior to selecting <guibutton>Write changes to disk</guibutton>
+ on the <guilabel>Write partitioning to disk</guilabel> screen,
+ as Fedora makes no permanent changes to your computer until
+ that point. Please be aware that stopping the installation
+ after partitioning has begun can leave your computer unusable.
</para>
</note>
<section id="sn-boot-menu">
commit 685c72af039527c0e7949b9d63bf4e88a4a4bc97
Author: David Nalley <david at gnsa.us>
Date: Fri Nov 21 09:17:40 2008 -0500
fixed the style error I introduced, and Paul pointed out in comment 2 of ticket 466384
diff --git a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
index 497ea03..15a177a 100644
--- a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
+++ b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@
<para>
To make the encryption effective, choose a good passphrase.
Note the use of the term "passphrase", as opposed to the term
- "password". This is intentional. Utilizing a phrase containing
+ "password." This is intentional. Utilizing a phrase containing
multiple words increases the security of your data.
</para>
<para>
commit dbac4591b38f744b962dac3b7c587ed534550f6b
Author: David Nalley <david at gnsa.us>
Date: Fri Nov 21 08:42:40 2008 -0500
made some slight wording changes re disk encryption passphrases in bug 466384
diff --git a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
index 0344aa9..497ea03 100644
--- a/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
+++ b/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml
@@ -394,9 +394,10 @@
</para>
</note>
<para>
- To make the encryption effective, choose a good passphrase. You
- can find more information about good passphrases in <xref
- linkend="ch-rootpassword"/>.
+ To make the encryption effective, choose a good passphrase.
+ Note the use of the term "passphrase", as opposed to the term
+ "password". This is intentional. Utilizing a phrase containing
+ multiple words increases the security of your data.
</para>
<para>
The encryption provided uses the Linux Unified Key System
commit aa9f9ffaf2f8b15893999b80098e5d7543d841bf
Author: David Nalley <david at gnsa.us>
Date: Fri Nov 21 08:05:03 2008 -0500
applied fixes to adminoptions.xml from BZ ticket 470669
diff --git a/en_US/adminoptions.xml b/en_US/adminoptions.xml
index 780454e..d4e56ac 100644
--- a/en_US/adminoptions.xml
+++ b/en_US/adminoptions.xml
@@ -354,8 +354,8 @@ Press <enter> for a shell]]></computeroutput>
5500 when in listening mode. To permit connections to this
port from other systems, choose <menuchoice>
<guimenu>System</guimenu>
- <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Security
- Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
+ <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>
+ Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
<guilabel>Other ports</guilabel>, and
<guibutton>Add</guibutton>. Enter <userinput>5500</userinput>
in the <guilabel>Port(s)</guilabel> field, and specify
@@ -509,8 +509,8 @@ Press <enter> for a shell]]></computeroutput>
By default, the syslog service listens on UDP port 514. To
permit connections to this port from other systems, choose
<menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
- <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Security
- Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
+ <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>
+ Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>. Select
<guilabel>Other ports</guilabel>, and
<guibutton>Add</guibutton>. Enter <userinput>514</userinput>
in the <guilabel>Port(s)</guilabel> field, and specify
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