en-US/Devel-Tools.xml

Karsten Wade quaid at fedoraproject.org
Thu Apr 2 23:49:15 UTC 2009


 en-US/Devel-Tools.xml |  102 +++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
 1 file changed, 51 insertions(+), 51 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 55ff2863b85db347278841a762a7e8a9e521a563
Author: Karsten Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 16:48:54 2009 -0700

    interim commit of XML and content final check

diff --git a/en-US/Devel-Tools.xml b/en-US/Devel-Tools.xml
index 8a7111f..7b568eb 100644
--- a/en-US/Devel-Tools.xml
+++ b/en-US/Devel-Tools.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
   </para>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Applicance Tools</title>
+    <title>Appliance Tools</title>
     <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
 	<term>ace</term>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 	  <package>ace-basic-site</package>,
 	  <package>ace-mysql</package>, <package>ace-php</package>,
 	  <package>ace-postgres</package>, and <package>
-	  ace-ssh</package>
+	  ace-ssh</package>.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -37,10 +37,10 @@
       <varlistentry>
 	<term>clisp</term>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para><package>clisp</package> (Common Lisp) has been updated
-	  to 2.47.  There are a number of changes, please review the
-	  project's site (<ulink type="http"
-	  url="http://clisp.cons.org">http://clisp.cons.org</ulink>).
+	  <para><package>clisp</package> (Common Lisp) has been
+	  updated to 2.47.  There are a number of changes, please
+	  review the project's site (<ulink type="http"
+	  url="http://clisp.cons.org"/>).
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -54,12 +54,11 @@
 	    <package>gcc-gnat</package>, and
 	    <package>gcc-objc</package>.
 	    <warning>
-	      <para>
-		Some of the changes involve syntax changes which have
-		the potential to break existing code. Please review
-		the NEWS files at <ulink type="http"
-		url="http://gcc.gnu.org">http://gcc.gnu.org</ulink>
-		carefully before upgrading.
+	      <title>Some of the changes involve syntax changes that have
+	      the potential to break existing code.</title>
+	      <para>Please review the NEWS files at <ulink
+	      type="http" url="http://gcc.gnu.org"/> carefully
+	      before upgrading.
 	      </para>
 	    </warning>
 	  </para>
@@ -71,10 +70,8 @@
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>
 	    GNU Common Lisp is updated to 2.68pre.  This long awaited
-	    release fixes a great many bugs.
-	    
-	    Project site: (<ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://www.gnu.org/software/gcl">http://www.gnu.org/software/gcl</ulink>)
+	    release fixes a great many bugs.  Project site: <ulink
+	    type="http" url="http://www.gnu.org/software/gcl"/>.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -82,23 +79,24 @@
 	<term>gforth</term>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>
-	    Fast and portable implementation of the ANS Forth language
+	    Fast and portable implementation of the ANS Forth language.
 	  </para>
 	  
 	  <para>
-	    Fedora 11 includes version 0.7.0 of gforth.
+	    Fedora 11 includes version 0.7.0 of
+	    <package>gforth</package>.
 	  </para>
 	  
 	  <para>
 	    There are a large number of changes to
-	    <package>gforth</package> in this release.  The developer is
+	    <package>gforth</package> in this release.  A developer is
 	    strongly encouraged to view the project site before
 	    proceeding.
 	  </para>
 	  
 	  <para>
-	    Project site: (<ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://www.jwdt.com/~paysan/gforth.html">http://www.jwdt.com/~paysan/gforth.html</ulink>)
+	    Project site: <ulink type="http"
+	    url="http://www.jwdt.com/~paysan/gforth.html">http://www.jwdt.com/~paysan/gforth.html</ulink>.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -110,7 +108,7 @@
 	    GNU Prolog has been updated to version 1.3.1.  The changes
 	    since 1.3.0 are largely of a bug fix nature.  The programmer
 	    may wish to review the NEWS file at <ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://www.gprolog.org/NEWS">http://www.gprolog.org/NEWS</ulink>.
+	    url="http://www.gprolog.org/NEWS"/>.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -124,7 +122,7 @@
 	    first update since 2006 and a number of functions have
 	    changed names.  The developer should review <ulink
 	    type="http"
-	    url="http://www.acpica.org/download/changes.txt">http://www.acpica.org/download/changes.txt</ulink>
+	    url="http://www.acpica.org/download/changes.txt"/>
 	    before proceeding.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -137,7 +135,7 @@
 	  <para>
 	    Fedora 11 now includes the MinGW compiler.  This is a major
 	    new feature allowing developers to build application for
-	    Windows and Linux from the same source code.
+	    Microsoft Windows and Linux from the same source code.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -146,11 +144,11 @@
 	<term>nasm</term>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>
-	    <package>nasm</package> has been upgraded from 2.03.01 to
+	    The <package>nasm</package> package has been upgraded from 2.03.01 to
 	    2.05.01.  This change involves a large number of bug fixes
-	    as well as the addition of a number of new directives.  See
+	    as well as the addition of a number of new directives.  Refer to
 	    the project's change list at <ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://www.nasm.us/doc/nasmdocc.html">http://www.nasm.us/doc/nasmdocc.html</ulink>
+	    url="http://www.nasm.us/doc/nasmdocc.html"/>
 	    for complete details.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -164,15 +162,16 @@
 	    <itemizedlist>
 	      <listitem><para>The Dynlink library is now available in
 	      native code on some platforms.</para></listitem>
-	      <listitem><para>ocamldebug is now supported under Windows
-	      (MSVC and Mingw ports) but without the replay
-	      feature. (Contributed by Dmitry Bely and Sylvain Le Gall
-	      at OCamlCore with support from Lexifi.)</para></listitem>
+	      <listitem><para><command>ocamldebug</command> is now
+	      supported under Windows (MSVC and Mingw ports) but
+	      without the replay feature. (Contributed by Dmitry Bely
+	      and Sylvain Le Gall at OCamlCore with support from
+	      Lexifi.)</para></listitem>
 	      <listitem><para>New port: MacOS X, AMD/Intel, 64
 	      bits. </para></listitem>
 	    </itemizedlist>			
-	    For more information, please consult the comprehensive list
-	    of changes at <ulink type="http"
+	    For more information, please consult the comprehensive
+	    list of changes at <ulink type="http"
 	    url="http://caml.inria.fr/pub/distrib/ocaml-3.11/notes/Changes">http://caml.inria.fr/pub/distrib/ocaml-3.11/notes/Changes</ulink>.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -187,8 +186,8 @@
 	    include faster labeling for complex optimization
 	    expressions, improvements in handling additional dialects,
 	    smarter loading of libraries and extensions to YAP
-	    compatibility.  Project site: (<ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://www.swi-prolog.org">http://www.swi-prolog.org</ulink>)
+	    compatibility.  Project site: <ulink type="http"
+	    url="http://www.swi-prolog.org"/>.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -199,9 +198,9 @@
 	  <para>
 	    Version 1.0.25 of Steel Bank Common Lisp includes a large
 	    number of enhancements and fixes over the previous 1.0.21
-	    version.  See <ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://sbcl.sourceforge.net/news.html">http://sbcl.sourceforge.net/news.html</ulink>
-	    for a complete list.
+	    version.  Refer to <ulink type="http"
+	    url="http://sbcl.sourceforge.net/news.html"/> for a
+	    complete list.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -225,11 +224,12 @@
 	    <itemizedlist>
 	      <listitem><para>Add PIC support to 64-bit
 	      Mach-O.</para></listitem>
-	      <listitem><para>Add --prefix and --suffix options for
-	      naming globals.</para></listitem>
-	      <listitem><para>Make "rel foo wrt ..gotpc" generate
-	      GOTPCREL in elf64 (alias for "rel foo wrt
-	      ..gotpcrel").</para></listitem>
+	      <listitem><para>Add <option>--prefix</option> and
+	      <option>--suffix</option> options for naming
+	      globals.</para></listitem>
+	      <listitem><para>Make <command>rel foo wrt ..gotpc</command> generate
+	      <computeroutput>GOTPCREL</computeroutput> in elf64 (alias for <command>rel foo wrt
+	      ..gotpcrel</command>).</para></listitem>
 	      <listitem><para>Add support for newly specified AVX/AES
 	      instructions not in original spec.</para></listitem>
 	      <listitem><para>Remove invalid 256-bit form of
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
 	      <listitem><para>Fix GAS syntax handling of no section
 	      flags.</para></listitem>
 	      <listitem><para>Name the absolute symbol in
-	      coff/win32/win64 output.</para></listitem>
+	      <filename>coff/win32/win64</filename> output.</para></listitem>
 	      <listitem><para>Miscellaneous other
 	      fixes.</para></listitem>
 	    </itemizedlist>
@@ -334,10 +334,10 @@
 	<term>pylint</term>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>
-	    <package>pylint</package> 0.16.0 includes a number of bug
-	    fixes and minor enhancements.  See the project site at
+	    The <package>pylint</package> 0.16.0 package includes a number of bug
+	    fixes and minor enhancements.  Refer to the project site at
 	    <ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://www.logilab.org/projects/pylint">http://www.logilab.org/projects/pylint</ulink>
+	    url="http://www.logilab.org/projects/pylint"/>
 	    for complete details.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -350,11 +350,11 @@
 	  <para>
 	    3.4.0 is a feature release with many significant
 	    improvements and the usual collection of bug fixes.  This
-	    release supports X86/Linux, AMD64/Linux, PPC32/Linux and
+	    release supports X86/Linux, AMD64/Linux, PPC32/Linux, and
 	    PPC64/Linux.  Support for recent distros (using gcc 4.4,
-	    glibc 2.8 and 2.9) has been added. See the complete
+	    glibc 2.8 and 2.9) has been added. Refer to the complete
 	    valgrind release notes at <ulink type="http"
-	    url="http://www.valgrind.org/docs/manual/dist.news.html">http://www.valgrind.org/docs/manual/dist.news.html</ulink>.
+	    url="http://www.valgrind.org/docs/manual/dist.news.html"/>.
 	  </para>
 	</listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -368,7 +368,7 @@
 	<term>colordiff</term>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>
-	    <package>colordiff</package> has been updated to
+	    The <package>colordiff</package> package has been updated to
 	    1.08a. Changes (from the project website) include: Support
 	    for numeric colours added, for 256-colour terminals
 	    (thanks to Gautam Iyer). Diff-types can now be specified





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