3 commits - en-US/Live.xml en-US/MailServers.xml en-US/Networking.xml

[Paul W. Frields]

 en-US/Live.xml        |    2 +-
 en-US/MailServers.xml |    2 +-
 en-US/Networking.xml  |   40 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 3 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 5173f740374e2c15d6891964c4ebc516073307d5
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 21:55:40 2009 -0400

    Capitalize Live

diff --git a/en-US/Live.xml b/en-US/Live.xml
index f0e284f..0c5fb94 100644
--- a/en-US/Live.xml
+++ b/en-US/Live.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 	<para>
 	  The Fedora Spins SIG (<ulink type="http"
 	  url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/SIGs/Spins">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/SIGs/Spins</ulink>)
-	  is continuously developing specialized live images for
+	  is continuously developing specialized Live images for
 	  specific purposes.
 	</para>
     </section>


commit 939850326731e4a4597d02ada781c829ad4d9c6e
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 21:45:07 2009 -0400

    We have blind users too -- "refer to," not "see."

diff --git a/en-US/MailServers.xml b/en-US/MailServers.xml
index 09984b4..06c6ab8 100644
--- a/en-US/MailServers.xml
+++ b/en-US/MailServers.xml
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 	<para>
 	  Fedora 11 includes version 1.1.11 of the
 	  <package>dovecot</package> mail server.  This is a bugfix
-	  release.  For a complete list of changes see <ulink
+	  release.  For a complete list of changes, refer to <ulink
 	  type="http"
 	  url="http://www.dovecot.org/list/dovecot-news/2009-February/000099.html">http://www.dovecot.org/list/dovecot-news/2009-February/000099.html</ulink>.
 	</para>


commit f9810510cf96df0bd75caf7ecf984292c0072051
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Thu Apr 2 21:34:16 2009 -0400

    Update Networking beat, several changes
    
           * Fix grammar issues
           * Tagging changes

diff --git a/en-US/Networking.xml b/en-US/Networking.xml
index 339064e..6bd16dd 100644
--- a/en-US/Networking.xml
+++ b/en-US/Networking.xml
@@ -11,25 +11,26 @@
       <term>DNSSEC</term>
       <listitem>
 	<para>	  
-	  Bind and unbound (recursive DNS servers) now enable DNSSEC
-	  validation in their default configuration. DNSSEC
-	  Lookaside Verification (DLV) is also enabled with the
-	  dlv.sc.org DLV Registry. This behavior can be modified in
-	  /etc/sysconfig/dnssec by changing the DNSSEC and DLV
-	  settings.
+	  The <package>bind</package> and <package>unbound</package>
+	  (recursive DNS servers) now enable DNSSEC validation in
+	  their default configuration. DNSSEC Lookaside Verification
+	  (DLV) is also enabled with the <systemitem
+	  class="fqdomainname">dlv.sc.org</systemitem> DLV
+	  Registry. This behavior can be modified in
+	  <filename>/etc/sysconfig/dnssec</filename> by changing the
+	  DNSSEC and DLV settings.
 	</para>
 	<para>
 	  With DNSSEC enabled, when a domain supplies DNSSEC data
-	  (such as .gov, .se, the ENUM zone and other TLD's) then
-	  that data will be cryptographically validated on the
-	  recursive DNS server. If validation fails, due to attempts
-	  at cache poisoning, for example via a Kaminsky Attack, then the
-	  enduser will not be given this forged/spoofed data. DNSSEC
-	  deployment is gaining speed rapidly, and is a crucial part
-	  and the next logical step to make the Internet more secure
-	  for end users. DLV is used to add DNSSEC signed domains
-	  into TLD's that themselves are not yet signed, such as
-	  .com and .org.
+	  (such as .gov, .se, the ENUM zone and other TLD's) then that
+	  data will be cryptographically validated on the recursive
+	  DNS server. If validation fails due to attempts at cache
+	  poisoning, for example via a Kaminsky Attack, then the end
+	  user will not be given this forged/spoofed data. DNSSEC
+	  deployment is gaining speed rapidly, and is a crucial and
+	  logical step to make the Internet more secure for end
+	  users. DLV is used to add DNSSEC signed domains into TLD's
+	  that themselves are not yet signed, such as .com and .org.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -42,9 +43,10 @@
 	  changed to <package>tigervnc</package>,
 	  <package>tigervnc-server</package> and
 	  <package>tigervnc-server-module</package>. Binary names are
-	  same as in previous version, <code>libvnc.so</code> module
-	  has been moved to <code>tigervnc-server-module</code>
-	  subpackage. Otherwise there should be no difference
+	  the same as in previous versions. The <code>libvnc.so</code>
+	  module has been moved to the
+	  <code>tigervnc-server-module</code> subpackage. Otherwise
+	  there should be no difference.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>