2 commits - en-US/Installer.xml
Rüdiger Landmann
rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Fri Apr 3 02:27:23 UTC 2009
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Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date: Fri Apr 3 12:27:14 2009 +1000
Merge branch 'master' of ssh://rlandmann@git.fedorahosted.org/git/docs/release-notes
commit 6d3260373be183a0ecefea630e845e60d245cca9
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date: Fri Apr 3 12:26:48 2009 +1000
Fix formatting and capitalization
diff --git a/en-US/Installer.xml b/en-US/Installer.xml
index b94053d..a36b80e 100644
--- a/en-US/Installer.xml
+++ b/en-US/Installer.xml
@@ -18,16 +18,16 @@
encounter a problem or have a question during installation that is
not covered in these release notes, refer to
<ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ">
- http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ</ulink>and
+ http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ</ulink> and
<ulink type="http"
url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common">
http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common</ulink>.</para>
</note>
- <application>Anaconda</application>is the name of the Fedora
+ <application>Anaconda</application> is the name of the Fedora
installer. This section outlines issues related to
- <application>Anaconda</application>and installing Fedora 11.</para>
+ <application>anaconda</application> and installing Fedora 11.</para>
<section>
- <title>Installation in text mode</title>
+ <title>Installation in Text Mode</title>
<para>
<note>
<para>We recommend that you use the graphical installer to
@@ -38,10 +38,10 @@
<citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>). If your
system has a graphical display, but graphical installation fails,
try booting with the
- <option>xdriver=vesa</option>option (see "Chapter 9. Boot
+ <option>xdriver=vesa</option> option (see "Chapter 9. Boot
Options" in the
<citetitle>Fedora 11 Installation Guide</citetitle>) or with the
- <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel>option
+ <guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel> option
when booting from the Fedora 11 Distro DVD.</para>
</note>The text-mode installation option in Fedora 11 is
significantly more streamlined than it was in earlier versions.
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
<term>Package selection</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- <application>Anaconda</application>now automatically selects
+ <application>Anaconda</application> now automatically selects
packages only from the base and core groups. These packages
are sufficient to ensure that the system is operational at
the end of the installation process, ready to install updates
@@ -65,20 +65,20 @@
<term>Advanced partitioning</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- <application>Anaconda</application>still presents you with
+ <application>Anaconda</application> still presents you with
the initial screen from previous versions that allows you to
specify where
- <application>Anaconda</application>should install Fedora on
+ <application>anaconda</application> should install Fedora on
your system. You can choose to use a whole drive, to remove
existing Linux partitions, or to use the free space on the
drive. However,
- <application>anaconda</application>now automatically sets the
+ <application>anaconda</application> now automatically sets the
layout of the partitions and does not ask you to add or
delete partitions or file systems from this basic layout. If
you require a customized layout at installation time, you
should perform a graphical installation over a VNC connection
or a kickstart installation. More advanced options yet, such
- as LVM, encrypted filesystems, and resizable filesystems are
+ as logical volume management (LVM), encrypted filesystems, and resizable filesystems are
still only available only in graphical mode and
kickstart.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -87,68 +87,68 @@
<term>Bootloader configuration</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- <application>Anaconda</application>now performs bootloader
+ <application>Anaconda</application> now performs bootloader
configuration automatically.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist></para>
<section>
- <title>Kickstart installations in text mode</title>
+ <title>Kickstart Installations in Text Mode</title>
<para>Text-mode installations using kickstart are carried out in
the same way that they were in previous versions. However,
because package selection, advanced partitioning, and bootloader
configuration are now automated in text mode,
- <application>Anaconda</application>cannot prompt you for
+ <application>anaconda</application> cannot prompt you for
information that it requires during these steps. You must
therefore ensure that the kickstart file includes the packaging,
partitioning, and bootloader configurations. If any of this
information is missing,
- <application>Anaconda</application>will exit with an error
+ <application>anaconda</application> will exit with an error
message.</para>
</section>
</section>
<section>
<title>Upgrade Notes</title>
<para>Upgrading from Fedora 9 directly to Fedora 11 using
- <command>yum</command>is not possible, you must upgrade to
+ <command>yum</command> is not possible, you must upgrade to
Fedora 10 first, then upgrade to Fedora 11. See
<ulink type="http"
url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq">
- http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq</ulink>for more
+ http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/YumUpgradeFaq</ulink> for more
information. You can also use
- <application>preupgrade</application>to upgrade directly to Fedora
+ <application>preupgrade</application> to upgrade directly to Fedora
11 using
- <application>Anaconda</application>, minimizing the system downtime
+ <application>anaconda</application>, minimizing the system downtime
by downloading the packages in advance.</para>
<para>Some modified configuration files will be replaced by their
original versions during the upgrade. Your modified versions of
these configuration files will be saved as
- <filename>*.rpmsave</filename>files in that case.</para>
+ <filename>*.rpmsave</filename> files in that case.</para>
</section>
<section>
- <title>Boot menu</title>
+ <title>Boot Menu</title>
<para>The boot menu for the Fedora Distro DVD includes a new
option:
<guilabel>Install system with basic video driver</guilabel>. This
option boots the system with the generic vesa driver (using the
- <option>xdriver=vesa</option>boot option) and allows you to use
+ <option>xdriver=vesa</option> boot option) and allows you to use
Fedora's graphical installation mode even when
- <application>anaconda</application>cannot load the correct driver
+ <application>anaconda</application> cannot load the correct driver
for your video card.</para>
</section>
<section>
- <title>boot.iso Now Works on Systems With UEFI</title>
+ <title>Updated <filename>boot.iso</filename></title>
<para>The Fedora installation CDs and DVD provide you with an image
file,
- <filename>boot.iso</filename>that you can burn to a CD and use to
+ <filename>boot.iso</filename>, that you can burn to a CD and use to
boot a system and start the installation process. Typically, you
would do this prior to installing Fedora from a local hard drive or
from a location on a network. You can now use the CD produced from
the
- <filename>boot.iso</filename>image to start installation on a
+ <filename>boot.iso</filename> image to start installation on a
system that uses Unified Extensible Firmware Interface (UEFI). CDs
produced from older versions of
- <filename>boot.iso</filename>only worked with systems that used
+ <filename>boot.iso</filename> only worked with systems that used
Basic Input Output System (BIOS).</para>
</section>
</section>
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