en-US/Multimedia.xml

[Paul W. Frields]

 en-US/Multimedia.xml |   13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 730c3f4a912cd2cf2d55306f0d7f244c81727ed9
Author: Paul W. Frields <stickster at gmail.com>
Date:   Fri May 1 17:11:05 2009 -0400

    Fix minor style errors; correct admonition with QA suggestions

diff --git a/en-US/Multimedia.xml b/en-US/Multimedia.xml
index ced93fb..47e7f1a 100644
--- a/en-US/Multimedia.xml
+++ b/en-US/Multimedia.xml
@@ -51,11 +51,11 @@
 	  destinations for the audio.
 	</para>
 	<para>
-	  With the removal of <package>gstreamer</package> based
+	  With the removal of the <package>gstreamer</package> based
 	  volume applet, you may be left without an obvious way to
 	  adjust ALSA sound levels after an upgrade. If they are set
 	  too low, raising the PulseAudio sound levels may not work
-	  acceptably. The way to deal with this is to install
+	  acceptably. To solve this issue, install
 	  <package>alsa-utils</package> and run <command>alsamixer
 	  -c0</command> from a shell prompt. To access the recording
 	  channels rather than the playback channels (for instance, to
@@ -70,10 +70,11 @@
 	<important>
 	  <title>How to report this problem</title>
 	  <para>
-	    Advanced or intrepid users should file a bug to report
-	    this problem. In many cases, the ALSA drivers need to be
-	    updated and proper technical details are required. Visit
-	    the blocker bug at
+	    If you encounter the volume problem, please file a bug to
+	    help us fix your sound card drivers or PulseAudio. Once
+	    the appropriate code is fixed, the simple volume control
+	    application will properly adjust your volume in the
+	    future. Visit the blocker bug at
 	    <ulink type="http" url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=497966#c1"/>
 	    and read the instructions, then file a new bug using the
 	    pre-filled template at <ulink type="http"