Branch 'f12' - 2 commits - en-US/OverView.xml

[John J. McDonough]

 en-US/OverView.xml |   36 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---
 1 file changed, 33 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit e13644c7e9fc49f41aa51f634e4debe8a69f701f
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Thu Sep 10 11:17:42 2009 -0400

    Revert "Add some features, correct an error"
    
    This reverts commit 37b118cfe9f13a8cfade866374ad540174fee7fb.
    
    Conflicts:

diff --git a/en-US/OverView.xml b/en-US/OverView.xml
index a993b8f..a860693 100644
--- a/en-US/OverView.xml
+++ b/en-US/OverView.xml
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 		<itemizedlist>
 			<listitem>
 				<para>
-					Improved WebCam suppor
+					Improved WebCam support
 				</para>
 			</listitem>
 			<listitem>


commit 37b118cfe9f13a8cfade866374ad540174fee7fb
Author: John J. McDonough <jjmcd at fedoraproject.org>
Date:   Thu Sep 10 11:14:17 2009 -0400

    Add some features, correct an error
    
    THe "major features" list and the "other features" list were fleshed
    out a bit.  An occurrence of Fedora 11 was corrected.

diff --git a/en-US/OverView.xml b/en-US/OverView.xml
index cc58f7f..a993b8f 100644
--- a/en-US/OverView.xml
+++ b/en-US/OverView.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 	<title>Fedora &PRODVER; Overview</title>
 	<remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/OverView">https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/OverView</ulink></remark>
 	<para>
-		As always, Fedora continues to develop (<ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Red_Hat_contributions">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Red_Hat_contributions</ulink>) and integrate the latest free and open source software (<ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features</ulink>). The following sections provide a brief overview of major changes from the last release of Fedora. For more details about other features that are included in Fedora 11, refer to their individual wiki pages that detail feature goals and progress:
+		As always, Fedora continues to develop (<ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Red_Hat_contributions">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Red_Hat_contributions</ulink>) and integrate the latest free and open source software (<ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features</ulink>). The following sections provide a brief overview of major changes from the last release of Fedora. For more details about other features that are included in Fedora &PRODVER; refer to their individual wiki pages that detail feature goals and progress:
 	</para>
 	<para>
 		<ulink type="http" url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Releases/12/FeatureList">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Releases/12/FeatureList</ulink>
@@ -22,7 +22,22 @@
 		<itemizedlist>
 			<listitem>
 				<para>
-					Shiny stuff
+					Improved WebCam suppor
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					Better Video Codec
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					Audio Improvements
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					Better Power Management
 				</para>
 			</listitem>
 		</itemizedlist>
@@ -32,7 +47,22 @@
 		<itemizedlist>
 			<listitem>
 				<para>
-					More shinyness
+					Automatic bug reporting tool
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					Bluetooth on demand
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					Many, many virtualization enhancements
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+					Still more security improvements
 				</para>
 			</listitem>