Branch 'f12' - en-US/Virtualization.xml

Rüdiger Landmann rlandmann at fedoraproject.org
Mon Sep 14 01:04:11 UTC 2009


 en-US/Virtualization.xml |   14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit e42487e962326a3111e3f15bf917b48e7836bddb
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Sep 14 11:03:28 2009 +1000

    More markup in Virtualization

diff --git a/en-US/Virtualization.xml b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
index dfdf013..6d33577 100644
--- a/en-US/Virtualization.xml
+++ b/en-US/Virtualization.xml
@@ -15,12 +15,12 @@
 <indexterm><primary>libvirt</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm><primary>libguestfs</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm><primary>guestfish</primary></indexterm>
-    Virtualization in Fedora 12 includes major changes, and new
+    Virtualization in Fedora 12 includes major changes, and new
     features, that continue to support KVM, Xen, and many other
     virtual machine platforms.
   </para>
   <para>
-    KVM and qemu have gained a number of new features in this
+    KVM and QEMU have gained a number of new features in this
     release. KVM guest memory usage and performance is improved by the
     addition of KSM and KVM Huge Page Backed Memory. The performance
     of the qcow2 image format is greatly improved. Support for both
@@ -29,11 +29,11 @@
   </para>
   <para>
     On the libvirt side, APIs have been added for storage management
-    and network interface management. libvirt now also runs qemu
+    and network interface management. libvirt now also runs QEMU
     processes unprivileged.
   </para>
   <para>
-    A new library (libguestfs) and an interactive tool (guestfish) is
+    A new library (<application>libguestfs</application>) and an interactive tool (<application>guestfish</application>) is
     now available for accessing and modifying virtual machine disk
     images.
   </para>
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 <indexterm><primary>KSM</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm><primary>KVM</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm><primary>kernel</primary></indexterm>
-      Kernel SamePage Merging or KSM, allows identical memory pages to
+      <firstterm>Kernel SamePage Merging</firstterm> (KSM) allows identical memory pages to
       be merged by the kernel into a single page shared between one or
       more processes. This feature is leveraged by KVM to allow
       multiple, similar, guest virtual machines to have a reduced
@@ -53,8 +53,8 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       For further details refer to
-      http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/KSM and
-      http://lwn.net/Articles/306704/
+      <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/KSM"></ulink> and
+      <ulink url="http://lwn.net/Articles/306704/"></ulink>
     </para>
   </section>	
 </section>





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