Branch 'f12' - en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml

[Rüdiger Landmann]

 en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml |    6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit baa08aaddb522c27269433f704c0265f99923f49
Author: Ruediger Landmann <r.landmann at redhat.com>
Date:   Mon Sep 14 13:45:15 2009 +1000

    Small copyedit for ScientificTechnical

diff --git a/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml b/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml
index 6beb911..47031d7 100644
--- a/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml
+++ b/en-US/ScientificTechnical.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 ]>
 
 <section id="sect-Release_Notes-Whats_new_in_science_and_mathematics">
-	<title>What's new in science and mathematics</title>
+	<title>What's new in science and mathematics</title>
 	<remark>This beat is located here: <ulink type="http" url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Scientific_and_Technical_Beat"> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Documentation_Scientific_and_Technical_Beat </ulink></remark>
 	<para>
 		Fedora &PRODVER; includes a range of packages for science and mathematics. The following packages have been updated for Fedora &PRODVER;.
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 	  <primary>R</primary>
 	</indexterm>
 	<para>
-	  <package>R</package> and many of it's subpackages have been
+	  <package>R</package> and many of its subpackages have been
 	  updated to the latest versions. There are a large number of
 	  new features which are described in detail on the project's
 	  mailing list: <ulink type="http"
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 	</indexterm>
 	<para>
 	  <package>fet</package> is a scheduling program for schools
-	  and universities. In addition to a large number of bugixes
+	  and universities. In addition to a large number of bug fixes
 	  and performance improvements, fet 5.10.2 allows for
 	  scheduling fixed time events, allows constraints to be
 	  placed on hours for teachers, allows activities to be locked