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RE: Fedora Gaming Writings: Supertux



will do now...



Mr Adam L Moreland (MAniX) | Registered Linux User: #417406
BA (Hons) Media Studies, 2nd Year, UoN
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From: "Bob Bevill" <rbevill wwol com>
Reply-To: For participants of the Documentation Project <fedora-docs-list redhat com> To: "'For participants of the Documentation Project'" <fedora-docs-list redhat com>
Subject: RE: Fedora Gaming Writings: Supertux
Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 13:59:22 -0400

Replace misspelled "ompletely" with "completely", in first paragraph.

In gameplay, "one" should be replaced with "once".

Comma, not period, after "extra life. Silver balls..."



Nice layout, good commentary.


Thanks,
Bob Bevill

-----Original Message-----
From: fedora-docs-list-bounces redhat com
[mailto:fedora-docs-list-bounces redhat com] On Behalf Of Adam Moreland
Sent: Friday, June 23, 2006 12:13 PM
To: fedora-docs-list redhat com
Subject: Fedora Gaming Writings: Supertux

Hey Hugo and all,

I have finished working on supertux. can someone just review this and see if

the format is what you were looking for. I have kept to the template, and it

needs just looking at, to double check for errors.

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Games/supertux

Hope it looks good.

obrigado!

Mr Adam L Moreland (MAniX) | Registered Linux User: #417406
BA (Hons) Media Studies, 2nd Year, UoN
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AC230C32
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>From: Hugo Cisneiros <hugo devin com br>
>Reply-To: For participants of the Documentation Project
><fedora-docs-list redhat com>
>To: For participants of the Documentation Project
><fedora-docs-list redhat com>
>Subject: Re: Fedora Gaming Writings: neverputt
>Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 10:28:29 -0300
>

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