FedoraXenQuickstartFC5

Noriko Mizumoto noriko at redhat.com
Wed May 31 07:41:02 UTC 2006


Hi docs team

I am proofreading the translation of the above document.
There are two small typo and suggestion I would like to make.
Is there any proper place to file, or should I contact the author directly?

Typo: Under Hints section,
"Q: I am trying to start *then xend service and nothing happens, then 
when I do a `xm list1 I get the following:"
* it should read "I am trying to start xend service and then nothing 
happens,"

Suggestion: Under Automatically Loading Domains On Startup section,
"Note that the /etc/init.d/xendomains script is broken with respect to 
its use of the LSB init functions."
* this is hard to translate. Is it possible to rephrase something like 
"Note that the etc/init.d/xendomains script does not comply with the LSB 
standard."?


Thanks
noriko




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