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readme-burning-isos - suggested changes



Hi,

Had a look over the above document on the F7t3 dvd iso, and felt it
could use some additions {other than FC6 -> F7} which seems to be
handled by some macros.

http://cvs.fedora.redhat.com/viewcvs/
readme-burning-isos/devel/en_US/README-BURNING-ISOS.xml?root=docs&rev=1.3&view=markup

I'm not part of the cvsl10n group so if the cvs tree is still open
before translation begins perhaps someone can check and commit ;) {I
couldn't find the doc anywhere on the wiki, so assuming it's a cvs thing}.

DaveT.

--- README-BURNING-ISOS.xml.1.3	2007-04-02 22:20:09.000000000 +1000
+++ README-BURNING-ISOS.xml	2007-04-03 01:15:58.000000000 +1000
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
       <para>
         &DISTRO; is distributed on multiple CD-sized ISO image files,
 	or a single DVD-sized ISO image file. You can use the single DVD
-	ISO file if your computer meets the following requirements:
+	ISO file if your computer meets both the following requirements:
       </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
       <para>
-        You may also need the <code>SHA1SUM</code> file to verify that
+        You should also download the <code>SHA1SUM</code> file to verify that
 	the files you have downloaded are complete and correct.
       </para>
     </section>
@@ -248,16 +248,17 @@
         The <filename>sha1sum.exe</filename> program computes and
 	displays hashes. To use it, save
 	<filename>sha1sum.exe</filename> to the same directory as the
-	ISO files. Select <guilabel>Run...</guilabel> from the Start
-	menu and then enter <userinput>cmd</userinput> for the name of
+	ISO files and the SHA1SUM file. Select <guilabel>Run...</guilabel> from the 
+	Start menu and then enter <userinput>cmd</userinput> for the name of
 	the program to start a <application>Command Prompt</application>
 	window. Then change into the download directory. Run
 	<command>sha1sum</command> with each ISO file like this:
       </para>
       <screen>cd "C:\Documents and Settings\Owner\My Documents\My Downloads\&DISTRO;"
-sha1sum.exe &FCXVERSPIN;-i386-disc1.iso</screen>
+sha1sum.exe &FCXVERSPIN;-i386-*.iso
+type SHA1SUM | find *.iso</screen>
       <para>
-        The program takes some time to complete, since it must read the
+        The program takes some minutes to complete, since it must read the
 	entire ISO file.
       </para>
       <para>


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