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Docs help requested for Feature Page Summary



Hi Docs People,

I'm wondering of there are any people who would be willing to do their word-smithing magic on the text for this page: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Releases/11/FeatureList

This page gets a lot of exposure and is read by a lot of different audiences, including the media. I'd like to make sure it is understandable and reads as well as it can. The summary that accompanies each feature name is particularly important. For the most part the summary comes directly from the individual feature page.

Thanks,
John


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