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Re: Fedora 11 Release Announcement FINAL



On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen
<eric christensenplace us> wrote:
> Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the release
> announcement[1] built.  We, at Docs, have reviewed the final draft and
> think we are in consensus that it is complete.  Please look over it
> and see if anything jumps out at you.  If not, this is what we'd like
> to go with.
>
> [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11

First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended?
Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter following.

Cheers!


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