Announcement tomorrow

[Paul W. Frields]

On Mon, Nov 16, 2009 at 11:42:32PM -0500, Eric Christensen wrote:
> On Tue, 2009-11-17 at 06:43 +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> > On 11/17/2009 06:31 AM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> > > I'll be using the text found here for tomorrow's announcement to
> > > fedora-announce-list:
> > > 
> > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_12_Announcement
> > > 
> > > I noticed we've dropped our old legacy habit of producing a humorous
> > > preface, in favor of a more cut and dried approach.  I'll likely
> > > precede the text with a short (promise!) thank-you note and a URL for
> > > http://get.fedoraproject.org at the top, for people who want to cut to
> > > the chase.
> > > 
> > > Thanks to everyone who worked on the announcement text.
> > 
> > I just realized that I didn't actually discuss that choice. I thought
> > our Fedora 12 Beta announcement got good reactions and wanted to just
> > improve on that with minor tweaks rather than use the humour approach.
> > Hope that is ok with everyone.
> > 
> > Rahul
> > 
> 
> Works for me.  I was just happy that someone had tweaked it for
> final!  :)

I just went through and did a final once-over for grammar/style
tweaks.  I'm now copying it for posting to the list.

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