2nd Draft Ready for Review: Ch. 1: Yum

[Douglas Silas]

Hi,

I've replied inline.

On 10/07/2009 06:10 PM, A. Mani wrote:
> Douglas Silas<dhensley at redhat.com>  wrote:
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>>
>> Note: Yum and its "ecosphere" (yum-utils, plugins, etc.) provide
>> many more capabilities than can be described in the Deployment
>> Guide. That said, I am very interested in Yum use cases and
>> procedures that system administrators find indispensable. One
>> example would be: documenting orphan and unneeded package removal
>> with the package-cleanup command. Or merging config files with
>> yum-plugin-merge-conf. Initial text for supplementary sections would
>> be much appreciated.
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> #yum list all
> #yum list available
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> are rarely used in this form.
> This should be improved.

I occasionally use them in this form. Do you have any suggestions? I 
have some changes to make to this section today and will be 
releasing the next draft, though these two commands will still be 
included.
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> Kpackagekit is not mentioned at all.

KPackageKit is mentioned in the PackageKit chapter, the first 
paragraph of which says:

For more information on PackageKit's architecture and available 
front ends, refer to Section 2.3, “PackageKit Architecture”.

http://dsilas.fedorapeople.org/Deployment_Guide/en-US/html-single/#ch-graphical_package_management
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>
> Best
>
> A. Mani
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Thanks,
-- 
Douglas Silas
Technical Writer | Red Hat, Inc.