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Re: Summit USB key doco



On Thu, Aug 13, 2009 at 10:55:17AM -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote:
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> > From: Máirín Duffy <mairin linuxgrrl com>
> > To: For discussions about marketing and expanding the Fedora user base
> > <fedora-marketing-list redhat com>
> > Subject: Re: Summit USB key doco
> > Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2009 10:39:27 -0400
> > 
> > On Wed, 2009-08-12 at 19:10 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> > > I posted the document here, and if you see something vital missing
> > > please let me know.  The finished product is due shortly.
> > 
> > woooo Scribus :) 
> > 
> > I copied the files into the design team collateral dir, I hope you don't
> > mind!
> > 
> > http://fedorapeople.org/groups/designteam/Fedora%20Collateral/USB%20Key%
> > 20Documentation/
> > 
> > Also, some quick feedback, take it or leave it :) None of it is
> > critical, more stylistic so it may not be worth changing:
> > 
> > "You can even make changes as you go to make Fedora suit your needs."
> > 
> > there's two makes here, maybe instead "You can even make changes as you
> > go to adapt Fedora to your needs."
> > 
> > "PowerPC based"
> > 
> > maybe should be "PowerPC-based"
> > 
> > "check out all the latest summit information through our handy
> > download page."
> > 
> > might want to capitalize - "Summit"
> > 
> > "Just double­click the "Red Hat
> > Summit 2009" icon on the desktop."
> > 
> > might be cool to throw a screenshot of the icon in so it's blazingly
> > obvious

Thanks Mo, I'm going to see if I can get the fixes in before press
time!

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