web/html/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US generated-index.php, 1.7, 1.8 index.php, 1.11, 1.12 legalnotice-opl.php, 1.5, 1.6 rv-revhistory.php, 1.11, 1.12 sn_accounts.php, 1.11, 1.12 sn_translating_docs.php, 1.11, 1.12 sn_translating_software.php, 1.11, 1.12

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-websites-list at redhat.com
Fri May 23 17:20:02 UTC 2008 

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/fedora/web/html/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17777/en_US

Modified Files:
	generated-index.php index.php legalnotice-opl.php 
	rv-revhistory.php sn_accounts.php sn_translating_docs.php 
	sn_translating_software.php 
Log Message:
Update to TQSG 0.5 and make sure hu, pl, nl, ja, and zh_CN are available as well




Index: index.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/index.php,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- index.php	19 Mar 2008 13:44:56 -0000	1.11
+++ index.php	23 May 2008 17:19:32 -0000	1.12
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 <div><div class="othercredit"><h3 class="othercredit">
 <span class="firstname">Diego</span> <span class="othername">Búrigo</span> <span class="surname">Zacarão</span>
 </h3></div></div>
-<div><p class="releaseinfo">Version 0.4.1 (2008-03-19)</p></div>
+<div><p class="releaseinfo">Version 0.5 (2008-04-18)</p></div>
 <div><p class="copyright">Copyright © 2005, 2006, 2007 Red Hat, Inc. and others</p></div>
 <div><a href="legalnotice-opl.php">Legal Notice</a></div>
 <div><a href="rv-revhistory.php">Revision History</a></div>
@@ -130,6 +130,9 @@
       the Translation guide or the manual of the specific translation
       tool.
     </p>
+<p>
+	    More information can be found in FAQ, <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/L10N/FAQ" target="_top">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/L10N/FAQ</a>.
+    </p>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div class="navfooter">


Index: legalnotice-opl.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/legalnotice-opl.php,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- legalnotice-opl.php	19 Mar 2008 13:44:56 -0000	1.5
+++ legalnotice-opl.php	23 May 2008 17:19:32 -0000	1.6
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 <a name="opl.terms"></a><ol type="I">
 <li>
 <a name="opl.require"></a><h2>
-<a name="id394605"></a>REQUIREMENTS ON BOTH UNMODIFIED AND MODIFIED
+<a name="id498017"></a>REQUIREMENTS ON BOTH UNMODIFIED AND MODIFIED
 	VERSIONS</h2>
 <p>
 	Open Publication works may be reproduced and distributed in
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
 </li>
 <li>
 <a name="opl.copyright"></a><h2>
-<a name="id394644"></a>COPYRIGHT</h2>
+<a name="id498055"></a>COPYRIGHT</h2>
 <p>
 	The copyright to each Open Publication is owned by its author(s)
 	or designee.
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 </li>
 <li>
 <a name="opl.scope"></a><h2>
-<a name="id408006"></a>SCOPE OF LICENSE</h2>
+<a name="id498069"></a>SCOPE OF LICENSE</h2>
 <p>
 	The following license terms apply to all Open Publication works,
 	unless otherwise explicitly stated in the document.
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 </li>
 <li>
 <a name="opl.modified.works"></a><h2>
-<a name="id408037"></a>REQUIREMENTS ON MODIFIED WORKS</h2>
+<a name="id497556"></a>REQUIREMENTS ON MODIFIED WORKS</h2>
 <p>
 	All modified versions of documents covered by this license,
 	including translations, anthologies, compilations and partial
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
 </li>
 <li>
 <a name="opl.good-practice"></a><h2>
-<a name="id415843"></a>GOOD-PRACTICE RECOMMENDATIONS</h2>
+<a name="id497621"></a>GOOD-PRACTICE RECOMMENDATIONS</h2>
 <p>
 	In addition to the requirements of this license, it is requested
 	from and strongly recommended of redistributors that:
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
 </li>
 <li>
 <a name="opl.options"></a><h2>
-<a name="id415489"></a>LICENSE OPTIONS</h2>
+<a name="id497672"></a>LICENSE OPTIONS</h2>
 <p>
 	The author(s) and/or publisher of an Open Publication-licensed
 	document may elect certain options by appending language to the


Index: rv-revhistory.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/rv-revhistory.php,v
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diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- rv-revhistory.php	19 Mar 2008 13:44:56 -0000	1.11
+++ rv-revhistory.php	23 May 2008 17:19:32 -0000	1.12
@@ -17,6 +17,18 @@
 <div class="revhistory"><table border="1" width="100%" summary="Revision history">
 <tr><th align="left" valign="top" colspan="3"><b>Revision History</b></th></tr>
 <tr>
+<td align="left">Revision 0.5</td>
+<td align="left">2008-04-18</td>
+<td align="left">NM</td>
+</tr>
+<tr><td align="left" colspan="3">
+        <p>
+          Updated Accounts and Subscriptions chapter to comform the
+          current FAS2. Some minor changes made to other chapters along
+          with bugs filed.
+        </p>
+      </td></tr>
+<tr>
 <td align="left">Revision 0.4.1</td>
 <td align="left">2008-03-19</td>
 <td align="left">NM</td>


Index: sn_accounts.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/sn_accounts.php,v
retrieving revision 1.11
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diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- sn_accounts.php	19 Mar 2008 13:44:56 -0000	1.11
+++ sn_accounts.php	23 May 2008 17:19:32 -0000	1.12
@@ -99,8 +99,7 @@
 chmod 644 ~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub</code></pre>
 </li>
 <li><p>
-	  Copy and paste the SSH key in the space provided in order to
-	  complete the account application.
+		This public key (~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub) will be used for your Fedora account creation described  in <a class="xref" href="sn_accounts.php#sn-apply-account" title="2.4. Applying for an Account">Section 2.4, “Applying for an Account”</a>. 
 	</p></li>
 </ol></div>
 </div>
@@ -149,6 +148,9 @@
 	</p>
 <pre class="screen"><code class="command">gpg --keyserver subkeys.pgp.net --send-keys <em class="replaceable"><code>GPGKEYID</code></em></code></pre>
 </li>
+<li><p>
+		This GPG key ID will be used for your Fedora account creation described in <a class="xref" href="sn_accounts.php#sn-apply-account" title="2.4. Applying for an Account">Section 2.4, “Applying for an Account”</a>.
+  	</p></li>
 </ol></div>
 </div>
 <div class="section" lang="en-US">
@@ -156,13 +158,28 @@
 <div class="procedure"><ol type="1">
 <li><p>
 	  To sign up for a Fedora account, first visit <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/" target="_top">https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/</a> and select
-	  <span class="guilabel"><strong>Apply for a new account</strong></span>. 
+	  <span class="guilabel"><strong>New Account</strong></span>. 
+	</p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  Fill in <span class="guilabel"><strong>Username</strong></span>, <span class="guilabel"><strong>Full Name</strong></span> and <span class="guilabel"><strong>Email</strong></span>, and click <span class="guibutton"><strong>Sign up!</strong></span>. Your password will be emailed to you.
 	</p></li>
 <li><p>
-	  Fill in the form and choose a password for your Fedora account.
-	  Enter information for your GPG key ID and SSH key in the form.
-	  In the <span class="guilabel"><strong>Comments</strong></span> field, write the
-	  languages you plan to work on.
+		Go back to <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/" target="_top">https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/</a> and log in with your password. The welcome page will be displayed, and it reminds you that CLA is not completed and that an SSH key is not submitted.
+	</p></li>
+<li><p>
+		To submit public SSH key and GPG key ID, click <span class="guilabel"><strong>My Account</strong></span> or go to <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit" target="_top"> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit</a>. 
+        </p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  In the Edit Account (user_name) page, enter your GPG key ID in <span class="guilabel"><strong>GPG Key ID:</strong></span> field. For pubic SSH key, click <span class="guilabel"><strong>Browse...</strong></span> button located next to <span class="guilabel"><strong>Public SSH Key:</strong></span> field and specify your public SSH key.
+  	</p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  <span class="guilabel"><strong>Telephone Number</strong></span> and <span class="guilabel"><strong>Postal Address</strong></span> fields are also required to fill in for signing the CLA. These information is NOT accessible by others except admin groups. Please refer to Fedora Privacy Policy at  <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Legal/PrivacyPolicy" target="_top"> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Legal/PrivacyPolicy</a>.
+  	</p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  Other fields will be displayed by any other member by visitng the user's view page.
+	</p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  Now click <span class="guilabel"><strong>Save!</strong></span> located at the bottom of this page to save your information.
 	</p></li>
 </ol></div>
 </div>
@@ -173,31 +190,16 @@
       <acronym class="acronym">CLA</acronym>.
     </p>
 <div class="procedure"><ol type="1">
-<li><p>Visit <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/send-cla.cgi" target="_top">https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/send-cla.cgi</a>. 
-	  Authenticate using your username and password from the previous
-	  process.
-	</p></li>
-<li><p>Wait for receipt of an email with an attachment. The
-	  attachment is an agreement you can sign and return. Save the
-	  attachment to your Desktop.
+<li><p>Visit <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/" target="_top">https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/</a> and login your account using your username and password obtained from the previous process.
 	</p></li>
-<li><p>Double-click the file on your Desktop to open it with an
-	  editor. Add the phrase "I agree" and your full name.
+<li><p>
+	  In the Welcome page, click <span class="guilabel"><strong>complete the CLA</strong></span> or go to <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit" target="_top"> https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit</a>.
 	</p></li>
-<li>
-<p>
-	  Digitally sign the text file using your GPG key with the
-	  following command, providing your password when prompted:
-	</p>
-<pre class="screen"><code class="command"> gpg -a --sign fedora-icla-{username}.txt </code></pre>
-<p>There is now a new file on your Desktop that ends with
-	  <code class="filename">.asc</code>.  This file is the
-	  signed version of the CLA.
-	</p>
-</li>
 <li><p>
-	  Open your email client again and reply to the CLA email.
-	  Attach the signed file which ends with <code class="filename">.asc</code>, and send the email.
+	  If the information of telephone number and postal address have not been provided yet, the Edit Account (user_name) page will be appeared. Otherwise Fedora Contributor License Agreement page will be displayed. Read through the agreement carefully and click <span class="guibutton"><strong>I agree</strong></span> if you are happy to do so. 
+	</p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  The user-view page is appeared and shows the <span class="guilabel"><strong>CLA:</strong></span> field as <span class="guilabel"><strong>CLA Done</strong></span>.
 	</p></li>
 </ol></div>
 </div>
@@ -205,15 +207,16 @@
 <div class="titlepage"><div><div><h3 class="title" id="sn-join-cvsl10n">2.6. Joining the <code class="systemitem">cvsl10n</code> Group</h3></div></div></div>
 <div class="procedure"><ol type="1">
 <li><p>
-	  Visit <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedora.redhat.com/accounts/userbox.cgi?_edit=1" target="_top">https://admin.fedora.redhat.com/accounts/userbox.cgi?_edit=1</a>. 
-	  Select <span class="guilabel"><strong>Add new membership</strong></span> at the bottom
-	  of the page. In the field <span class="guilabel"><strong>Groupname</strong></span>,
-	  enter <strong class="userinput"><code>cvsl10n</code></strong> and select
-	  <span class="guilabel"><strong>Add</strong></span>.
+	  In the user-view page, click <span class="guilabel"><strong>Apply For a new Group</strong></span> located in the left side bar. If you like to do this step sometime later, your user-view page can be reached at <a class="ulink" href="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/view/user_name" target="_top">https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/view/user_name</a>.
+	 </p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  Click <span class="guilabel"><strong>C</strong></span> of the alphabet, it returns the list of the groups starting with 'c'.
+	</p></li>
+<li><p>
+	  Find the group name <span class="guilabel"><strong>cvsl10n</strong></span> in the list and click <span class="guilabel"><strong>Apply</strong></span>. 
 	</p></li>
 <li><p>
-	  An administrator is notified of your application, and offers
-	  to sponsor you. This may take between an hour and a few days.
+	  An administrator is notified of your application, and offers to sponsor you. This may take between an hour and a few days. The membership notification will be emailed to you once sponsored. 
 	</p></li>
 </ol></div>
 <div class="caution" style="margin-left: 0.5in; margin-right: 0.5in;"><table border="0" summary="Caution">
@@ -255,15 +258,10 @@
 <div class="titlepage"><div><div><h3 class="title" id="sn-create-wikiacct">2.8. Creating a Wiki Account</h3></div></div></div>
 <div class="procedure"><ol type="1">
 <li><p>
-	  Visit <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/UserPreferences/" target="_top">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/UserPreferences/</a>. For
-	  your username, choose a name like 'FirstnameLastname' and
-	  select <span class="guilabel"><strong>Create Profile</strong></span>.
+	  A current wiki user can give you Edit access on the wiki. Contact someone from the Edit Group at <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroup/" target="_top">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroup/</a>, or add your name to the EditGroupQueue at <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroupQueue/" target="_top">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroupQueue/</a>, and someone will add you shortly.
 	</p></li>
 <li><p>
-	  A current wiki user can now give you Edit access on the wiki.
-	  Contact someone from the Edit Group at <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroup/" target="_top">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroup/</a>, or add
-	  your name to the EditGroupQueue at <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroupQueue/" target="_top">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/EditGroupQueue/</a>, and
-	  someone will add you shortly.
+	  Once added, Visit <a class="ulink" href="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/UserPreferences/" target="_top">http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/UserPreferences/</a> and create a profile page. For your username, choose a name like 'FirstnameLastname' and select <span class="guilabel"><strong>Create Profile</strong></span>.
 	</p></li>
 <li><p>
 	  If you are starting a new language, or want to become the


Index: sn_translating_docs.php
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RCS file: /cvs/fedora/web/html/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/sn_translating_docs.php,v
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diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- sn_translating_docs.php	19 Mar 2008 13:44:56 -0000	1.11
+++ sn_translating_docs.php	23 May 2008 17:19:32 -0000	1.12
@@ -47,22 +47,22 @@
 <li><p><span class="package">gnome-doc-utils</span></p></li>
 <li><p><span class="package">xmlto</span></p></li>
 <li><p><span class="package">make</span></p></li>
+<li><p><span class="package">w3m</span></p></li>
 </ul></div>
 <p>The <span class="package">gnome-doc-utils</span> package provides the
     <code class="command">xml2po</code> command, and does not require you to
-    install the GNOME desktop environment.  The <span class="package">xmlto</span>
-    and <span class="package">make</span> packages contain tools necessary for
+    install the GNOME desktop environment.  The <span class="package">xmlto</span>, <span class="package">make</span> and <span class="package">w3m</span> packages contain tools necessary for
     testing document builds and translations.</p>
 <p>
       To install these packages, use the following command:
     </p>
-<pre class="screen"><code class="command">su -c 'yum install gnome-doc-utils xmlto make'</code></pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">su -c 'yum install gnome-doc-utils xmlto make w3m'</code></pre>
 <div class="section" lang="en-US">
 <div class="titlepage"><div><div><h3 class="title" id="sn-get-started">4.1. Getting Started</h3></div></div></div>
 <p>
       The Fedora documentation is stored in a CVS repository under the
       directory <code class="filename">docs/</code>.  To list the available
-      modules, run the following commands:
+      modules, run the following commands (where <em class="replaceable"><code>username</code></em> is replaced with your Fedora account username):
     </p>
 <pre class="screen"><code class="command">export CVSROOT=:ext:<em class="replaceable"><code>username</code></em>@cvs.fedoraproject.org:/cvs/docs</code>
 <code class="command">cvs co -c</code></pre>
@@ -72,9 +72,7 @@
       out the <code class="filename">docs-common</code> module to work with some
       modules.
     </p>
-<pre class="screen">
-      <code class="command">cvs co release-notes/</code>
-    </pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cvs co release-notes docs-common</code></pre>
 <p>
       Some modules are <em class="firstterm">release specific</em>, meaning
       that they have a <em class="firstterm">branch</em>, or subdirectory,
@@ -88,11 +86,36 @@
       translators work on this branch, and port changes back to previous
       branches as required.
     </p>
+<div class="tip" style="margin-left: 0.5in; margin-right: 0.5in;"><table border="0" summary="Tip: How to get the smallest check out">
+<tr>
+<td rowspan="2" align="center" valign="top" width="25"><img alt="[Tip]" src="./stylesheet-images/tip.png"></td>
+<th align="left">How to get the smallest check out</th>
+</tr>
+<tr><td align="left" valign="top">
+<p>
+	Another method is to use a module alias.  Using the alias
+	<code class="filename">release-notes-<em class="replaceable"><code>version</code></em></code> 
+	checks out just the <em class="replaceable"><code>version</code></em>
+	specified. This method brings the versioned subdirectory and the
+	<code class="filename">docs-common</code> module into one directory,
+	<code class="filename">release-notes-<em class="replaceable"><code>version</code></em></code>. 
+	For example, to get just the <code class="filename">-devel</code>
+	version, use this command:
+      </p>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cvs co release-notes-devel</code></pre>
+<p>
+	Everything needed to build the document is now in the directory
+	<code class="filename">release-notes-devel/</code>:
+      </p>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">ls release-notes-devel</code>
+<code class="command">CVS  docs-common  release-notes</code></pre>
+</td></tr>
+</table></div>
 </div>
 <div class="section" lang="en-US">
 <div class="titlepage"><div><div><h3 class="title" id="sn-creating-common">4.2. Creating Common Files</h3></div></div></div>
 <p>
-	If you are creating the first-ever translation for a locale, you
+	Only if you are creating the first-ever translation for a locale, you
 	must first translate some common files used in all documents for
 	your locale.  The common files are located in <code class="filename">docs-common/common/</code>.
       </p>
@@ -219,7 +242,7 @@
 	    In a terminal, go to the directory of the document you want
 	    to translate:
 	  </p>
-<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cd ~/docs/example-tutorial</code></pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cd ~/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/</code></pre>
 </li>
 <li>
 <p class="title"><b>Add Locale to List</b></p>
@@ -231,8 +254,14 @@
 	    you are translating has not been updated, notify the Fedora Documentation Project
 	    or file a bug using Bugzilla.</p>
 <p>Add your translation language code to the list in the
-	  <code class="filename">po/LINGUAS</code> file.  <span class="emphasis"><em>Keep the list
-	    in alphabetical order.</em></span></p>
+	  <code class="filename">po/LINGUAS</code> file using your preferred editor. For example,
+  	  </p>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">vi po/LINGUAS</code></pre>
+<p>
+	    Press 'a' to modify and add your language code. Once added, save it and exit the editor.
+    	  </p>
+<p><span class="emphasis"><em>Please remember to keep the list in alphabetical order.</em></span> 
+	  </p>
 </li>
 <li>
 <p class="title"><b>Create PO File</b></p>
@@ -259,7 +288,7 @@
      </p>
 <pre class="screen"><code class="command">make html-<em class="replaceable"><code>pt_BR</code></em></code></pre>
 <p>You can read the resulting HTML files with a Web
-	  browser.</p>
+	  browser. If no HTML is created, the error message(s) can be found in the output. Please resolve them before commit.</p>
 <div class="important" style="margin-left: 0.5in; margin-right: 0.5in;"><table border="0" summary="Important: Always Test Your Translation">
 <tr>
 <td rowspan="2" align="center" valign="top" width="25"><img alt="[Important]" src="./stylesheet-images/important.png"></td>
@@ -275,7 +304,7 @@
 <li>
 <p class="title"><b>Commit Work</b></p>
 <p>
-	    When you have finished your translation, commit the <code class="filename">.po</code> file. You may note the percent complete or some other useful message at commit time.
+		Before commit your <code class="filename">.po</code> file, always make sure that the html has been generated successfully. You may note the percent complete or some other useful message at commit time.
 	  </p>
 <pre class="screen"><code class="command">cvs ci -m <em class="replaceable"><code>'Translating... 400/10/126'</code></em> po/<em class="replaceable"><code>pt_BR</code></em>.po</code></pre>
 </li>


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@@ -66,21 +66,20 @@
 <pre class="screen"><code class="command">mkdir -p ~/myproject/comps/</code></pre>
 <p>
       To work on another module later, make a directory with the module
-      name under the parent directory such as <code class="filename">myproject</code>.
+      name under the parent directory such as <code class="filename">~/myproject/system-config-printer/</code>.
     </p>
 </div>
 <div class="section" lang="en-US">
 <div class="titlepage"><div><div><h3 class="title" id="sn-obtain-translate-modules">3.2. Obtaining and Translating Modules</h3></div></div></div>
 <p>
-      Now that you have prepared a directory structure, you can download
-      a file to translate.
+	    Now that you have prepared a directory structure, you can download a file to translate. You may need to communicate with other translators in your language team to avoid confliction. If you are not sure, please contact your language coordinator.
     </p>
 <div class="procedure"><ol type="1">
 <li><p>
-		Visit your language page such as <a class="ulink" href="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/" target="_top">http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/</a>, and select a target release. The interface will redirect you to a page for that release, such as <a class="ulink" href="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/fedora-9/" target="_top">http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/fedora-9/</a>.
+		Visit your language page such as <a class="ulink" href="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/" target="_top">http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/</a>, and select a target release. The interface will redirect you to a page for that release, such as <a class="ulink" href="http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/fedora-9" target="_top">http://translate.fedoraproject.org/languages/ja/fedora-9</a>.
 	</p></li>
 <li><p>
-	 Scroll down the page to find the table of all modules available for that release. Use the green download icon next to each module to download the po file to the directory you created in the previous section.
+	 Scroll down the page to find the table of all modules available for that release. Use the green download icon next to each module to download the po file to the directory you created in the previous section. 
 	</p></li>
 <li>
 <p>
@@ -169,8 +168,7 @@
 	  The <span class="guilabel"><strong>Submit</strong></span> page appears and displays the
 	  message <span class="guilabel"><strong>Your submission was committed
 	    successfully</strong></span>. If you receive an error or some
-	  other success message, please post it to the Fedora
-	  Translation Project mailing list so it can be addressed.
+	  other success message, please post it to the Fedora Localization Project mailing list so it can be addressed.
 	</p>
 </li>
 </ol></div>
@@ -193,7 +191,7 @@
 </li>
 <li><p>
 	  Once you finish the translation, follow the same steps for
-	  verifying and committing your translation described in
+	  verifying and then commit your translation described in
 	  previous section. 
 	</p></li>
 <li>
@@ -216,33 +214,42 @@
 <div class="procedure"><ol type="1">
 <li>
 <p>
-	  Change directory to the package you want to proofread:
+	  Change directory to the package you want to proofread. For example,
 	</p>
-<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cd ~/myproject/<em class="replaceable"><code>package_name</code></em></code></pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cd ~/myproject/<em class="replaceable"><code>system-config-printer/</code></em></code></pre>
 </li>
 <li>
 <p>
 	  Convert the <code class="filename">.po</code> file to
-	  a <code class="filename">.mo</code> file with
-	  <code class="command">msgfmt</code>:
+	  a <code class="filename">.mo</code> file using <code class="command">msgfmt</code> with <code class="option">-o</code> option:
 	</p>
-<pre class="screen"><code class="command">msgfmt <em class="replaceable"><code>lang</code></em>.po</code></pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">msgfmt -o system-config-printer.mo <em class="replaceable"><code>ja</code></em>.po</code></pre>
 </li>
 <li>
 <p>
-	  Overwrite the existing <code class="filename">.mo</code> file in
-	  <code class="filename">/usr/share/locale/<em class="replaceable"><code>lang</code></em>/LC_MESSAGES/</code>. 
+	  As a root user, overwrite the existing <code class="filename">.mo</code> file in
+	  <code class="filename">/usr/share/locale/<em class="replaceable"><code>lang</code></em>/LC_MESSAGES/</code>.
+  	</p>
+<p>
 	  First, back up the existing file:
 	</p>
-<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cp /usr/share/locale/<em class="replaceable"><code>lang</code></em>/LC_MESSAGES/<em class="replaceable"><code>package_name</code></em>.mo <em class="replaceable"><code>package_name</code></em>.mo-backup</code>
-<code class="command">mv <em class="replaceable"><code>package_name</code></em>.mo /usr/share/locale/<em class="replaceable"><code>lang</code></em>/LC_MESSAGES/</code></pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">su -</code></pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">cp /usr/share/locale/<em class="replaceable"><code>ja</code></em>/LC_MESSAGES/<em class="replaceable"><code>system-config-printer</code></em>.mo <em class="replaceable"><code>system-config-printer</code></em>.mo-backup</code></pre>
+<p>
+	  Now move the file converted for proofreading.
+	</p>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">mv <em class="replaceable"><code>system-config-printer</code></em>.mo /usr/share/locale/<em class="replaceable"><code>ja</code></em>/LC_MESSAGES/</code></pre>
+<p>
+	  Exit root user.
+	</p>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">exit</code></pre>
 </li>
 <li>
 <p>
 	  Proofread the package with the translated strings as part of
 	  the application:
 	</p>
-<pre class="screen"><code class="command">LANG=<em class="replaceable"><code>lang</code></em> <em class="replaceable"><code>package_command</code></em></code></pre>
+<pre class="screen"><code class="command">LANG=<em class="replaceable"><code>ja_JP.UTF-8</code></em> <em class="replaceable"><code>system-config-printer</code></em></code></pre>
 </li>
 </ol></div>
 <p>

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