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Re: [libvirt] [PATCH] doc: update virsh manual



On 11/17/2010 07:15 AM, Osier Yang wrote:
> * tools/virsh.pod (change things like "edit domain.xml" into
>   "vi domain.xml", so that it's more clear for user)
> ---
>  tools/virsh.pod |   16 ++++++++--------
>  1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/tools/virsh.pod b/tools/virsh.pod
> index 8032256..ca8ba74 100644
> --- a/tools/virsh.pod
> +++ b/tools/virsh.pod
> @@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ L<http://libvirt.org/formatdomain.html#elementsCPU>
> 
>  The following commands manipulate domains directly, as stated
>  previously most commands take domain-id as the first parameter. The
> -I<domain-id> can be specified as an short integer, a name or a full UUID.
> +I<domain-id> can be specified as a short integer, a name or a full UUID.
> 
>  =over 4
> 
> @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ If I<--console> is requested, attach to the console after creation.
>  B<Example>
> 
>   virsh dumpxml <domain-id> > domain.xml
> - edit domain.xml
> + vi domain.xml (or make changes with your other text editor)

Thanks for reviving this; and your wording works for me (I'm sure I
could bike shed several other wording choices, but this one's reasonable
enough to avoid any further delays).

ACK, and applied.

-- 
Eric Blake   eblake redhat com    +1-801-349-2682
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org

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