[libvirt] [PATCH] docs: Add docs for new extra parameter pkipath
Justin Clift
jclift at redhat.com
Thu Jan 27 13:42:34 UTC 2011
On 27/01/2011, at 8:01 PM, Osier Yang wrote:
> * docs/remote.html.in
> ---
> docs/remote.html.in | 30 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> 1 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/docs/remote.html.in b/docs/remote.html.in
> index b0fdb7c..a68d0fa 100644
> --- a/docs/remote.html.in
> +++ b/docs/remote.html.in
> @@ -308,6 +308,22 @@ Note that parameter values must be
> <td colspan="2"/>
> <td> Example: <code>no_tty=1</code> </td>
> </tr>
> + <tr>
> + <td>
> + <code>pkipath</code>
> + </td>
> + <td> tls</td>
> + <td>
> + Specifies x509 certificates path for client. As long as one of the
> + certificates (CA cerfificate, client key, client certificate) doesn't
> + exist in the specified path, the connection will fail with fatal
> + error.
Typo. The "certificate" after the CA is misspelled. ("f" instead of "t"
in it). The wording for this paragraph could probably be tweaked
a bit anyway. How about something like:
Specifies the x509 certificates path for the client. If any of the
CA certificate, client certificate, or client key are missing, the
connection will fair with a fatal error.
> +</td>
Indentation is off?
> + </tr>
> + <tr>
> + <td colspan="2"/>
> + <td> Example: <code>pkipath=/tmp/pki/client</code> </td>
> + </tr>
> </table>
> <h3>
> <a name="Remote_certificates">Generating TLS certificates</a>
> @@ -372,6 +388,20 @@ next section.
> </td>
> </tr>
> </table>
> + <p>
> +If 'pkipath' is specified in URI, then all the client certificates should
> +be able to found in the path specified, otherwise, connection will fail
> +with fatal error. And if 'pkipath' is not specified:
"should be able to found" -> "must be found"
"otherwise, connection will fail with fatal" -> "otherwise the connection will
fail with a fatal"
"And if" -> "If"
(yeah, I'm being picky, they're not actually Too Bad as it is) :)
> +</p>
Indentation again?
> + <ul>
> + <li> For user who is non-root, libvirt trys to find the certificates
"For a non-root user, ..." maybe?
"trys" -> "tries"
> +in $HOME/.pki/libvirt, if one of the required certificates can not be found,
Needs to be a full stop rather than a comma at the end of the "pki/libvirt" string.
The "If once of the ..." text after is sounds like a new sentence.
> +global default locations(/etc/pki/CA/cacert.pem,
Missing a space before the "(/etc" bit.
It's probably slightly better wording to add "then the" before the word "global"
here too. So its "then the global". It just sounds better. :)
> +/etc/pki/libvirt/private/clientkey, /etc/pki/libvirt/clientcert.pem) will be
> +used.
> +</li>
Indentation.
> + <li> For user who is root, global default location will be used. </li>
"For the root user, ..."
> + </ul>
> <h4>
> <a name="Remote_TLS_background">Background to TLS certificates</a>
> </h4>
> --
> 1.7.3.2
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