[libvirt] [PATCH] docs: Document offline migration

[Eric Blake]

On 12/11/2012 07:30 AM, Jiri Denemark wrote:
> ---
>  docs/migration.html.in | 14 ++++++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 14 insertions(+)
> 
> diff --git a/docs/migration.html.in b/docs/migration.html.in
> index c6b62f7..f311655 100644
> --- a/docs/migration.html.in
> +++ b/docs/migration.html.in
> @@ -136,6 +136,20 @@
>        facility should be used.
>      </p>
>  
> +    <h2><a name="offline">Offline migration</a></h2>
> +
> +    <p>
> +      Offline migration transfers inactive definition of a domain (which

s/transfers/transfers the/

> +      may or may not be active). After successful completion, the domain
> +      remains in its current state on source host and is defined but

s/on/on the/

> +      inactive on destination host. It's a bit more clever than

s/on/on the/

> +      <code>virsh dumpxml</code> on source host followed by
> +      <code>virsh define</code> on destination host, as offline migration
> +      will run pre-migration hook to update the domain XML on destination

s/run/run the/

> +      host. Currently, copying non-shared storage is not supported during
> +      offline migration.
> +    </p>
> +
>      <h2><a name="uris">Migration URIs</a></h2>
>  
>      <p>
> 

ACK with those grammar fixes.

-- 
Eric Blake   eblake redhat com    +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org

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