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Re: [libvirt] [PATCH 5/5] docs: aesthetical cleanups



On 2012年12月17日 23:17, Martin Kletzander wrote:
Removing "exempli gratia" when there should be dots afterwards, also
Uppercase letter should be present when starting a sentence.  Sorry
for the double line in the last hunk even though it's just adding a
word, but it would require to have new sentence starting on a newline
and that didn't seem very nice.
---
  docs/hacking.html.in | 12 ++++++------
  1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/hacking.html.in b/docs/hacking.html.in
index 40acdbb..1363779 100644
--- a/docs/hacking.html.in
+++ b/docs/hacking.html.in
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
      <p>
        The keywords<code>if</code>,<code>for</code>,<code>while</code>,
        and<code>switch</code>  must have a single space following them
-      before the opening bracket. eg
+      before the opening bracket. Example:

Not sure I like this, as I'm a fan of using "e.g.". :-)

And isn't "e.g." is used everywhere across the project? Should we
just fix it by s/eg/e.g./?

Osier


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