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Re: [libvirt] [PATCH 2/2] manual: Fix copy-paste errors



On 04/02/13 16:15, Martin Kletzander wrote:
Descriptions for vol-download and vol-upload didn't make much of a
sense.

s/of a//


Resolves: https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=923613
---
  tools/virsh.pod | 6 +++---
  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/tools/virsh.pod b/tools/virsh.pod
index 11447fe..768b334 100644
--- a/tools/virsh.pod
+++ b/tools/virsh.pod
@@ -2541,7 +2541,7 @@ I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to delete.
  Upload the contents of I<local-file> to a storage volume.
  I<--pool> I<pool-or-uuid> is the name or UUID of the storage pool the volume
  is in.
-I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to wipe.
+I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to write to.

I'd write:
I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume where the file will be uploaded.

  I<--offset> is the position in the storage volume at which to start writing
  the data. I<--length> is an upper bound of the amount of data to be uploaded.
  An error will occur if the I<local-file> is greater than the specified length.
@@ -2549,10 +2549,10 @@ An error will occur if the I<local-file> is greater than the specified length.
  =item B<vol-download> [I<--pool> I<pool-or-uuid>] [I<--offset> I<bytes>]
  [I<--length> I<bytes>] I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> I<local-file>

-Download the contents of I<local-file> from a storage volume.
+Download the contents of a storage volume to I<local-file>.
  I<--pool> I<pool-or-uuid> is the name or UUID of the storage pool the volume
  is in.
-I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to wipe.
+I<vol-name-or-key-or-path> is the name or key or path of the volume to download.
  I<--offset> is the position in the storage volume at which to start reading
  the data. I<--length> is an upper bound of the amount of data to be downloaded.


ACK with or without my suggestion used.

Peter


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