[Osdc-edu-authors] POSSE video review

[Kim Jokisch]

This looks good. A few thoughts:

Not sure you need the title card...The rest is so informal, that could 
add a formality you don't need. It seems to me like he is citing an 
example.

Suggest you remove the "In March we will be announcing this summer's 
POSSE" and add the teachopensource.org as text on screen, as well as 
titles.

Perhaps include those cities in the blog post. Mel, can you provide those?

Thanks
Kim

On 5/20/10 3:13 PM, Colby Hoke wrote:
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> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject:     Re: [Osdc-edu-authors] POSSE video review
> Date:     Wed, 19 May 2010 14:52:56 -0400
> From:     Colby Hoke <choke at redhat.com>
> To:     Chris Tyler <chris at tylers.info>
> CC:     osdc-edu-authors at redhat.com
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> On 5/19/10 2:21 PM, Chris Tyler wrote:
>>  On Tue, 2010-05-18 at 14:36 -0400, Colby Hoke wrote:
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>>>  Apologies if you've seen this email before - I thought I was signed up
>>>  to the list. Now I know I am!
>>>
>>>
>>>  Hey all, I could use some more feedback on a video cut about POSSE. I
>>>  know it still might need some graphic work (minimal) and some audio
>>>  work, but what do you all think of the content?
>>>
>>>  rhbrandcomm.com/posse
>>>  u: rhbrandcomm
>>>  p: donkey128
>>>
>>>  It should be the only ogg up there. Please download, then watch. We've
>>>  had some problems otherwise! Thanks.
>>>
>>  Hi Colby,
>>
>>  There seems to be a bit of a continuity jump from Mel talking about
>>  involving non-developer students to where I apparently respond with a
>>  story about the animated PNG format -- looks like a question and answer
>>  but the two topics don't match up. Apart from that it flows pretty 
>> well.
>>
>>  -Chris
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> Yeah - it's a definite jump. I'm thinking I'm going to put a title card
> in there that helps explain it. Maybe something like "student already
> contributing" or something along those lines. Suggestions?
>