[Patternfly] NCDevCon

[Robb Hamilton]

great feedback, gabriel.  thanks! i’ve implemented your recommendation.

keep ‘em coming!

On May 27, 2014, at 11:15 AM, Gabriel Cardoso <gcardoso at redhat.com> wrote:

> Hi Robb,
> 
> By reading the text I had the impression that the emphasis is on Bootstrap, not on Patternfly. It seems that we created patternfly because of bootstrap, and not because of the need for design commonality. Is that what you want to communicate?
> 
> If so, it’s perfect. If not, you just need to invert the order of the sentences, e.g: "Creating a common UI across projects using Bootstrap”, and start the text talking about patternfly and the need for commonality, quoting Bootstrap later.
> 
> Hope that makes sense.
> 
> Gabriel
> 
> 
> On May 27, 2014, at 10:46 AM, Robb Hamilton <rhamilto at redhat.com> wrote:
> 
>> https://etherpad.mozilla.org/vCVGboq5gM
> 
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> Gabriel Cardoso
> User Experience Designer @ Red Hat
>