[Patternfly] NCDevCon

[Greg Sheremeta]

I added my bio, and also tweaked the last sentence to take the emphasis off of Red Hat.

----- Original Message -----
> From: "Robb Hamilton" <rhamilto at redhat.com>
> To: "Gabriel Cardoso" <gcardoso at redhat.com>
> Cc: "Greg Sheremeta" <gshereme at redhat.com>, patternfly at redhat.com, "Einav Cohen" <ecohen at redhat.com>
> Sent: Tuesday, May 27, 2014 11:18:51 AM
> Subject: Re: [Patternfly] NCDevCon
> 
> great feedback, gabriel.  thanks! i’ve implemented your recommendation.
> 
> keep ‘em coming!
> 
> On May 27, 2014, at 11:15 AM, Gabriel Cardoso <gcardoso at redhat.com> wrote:
> 
> > Hi Robb,
> > 
> > By reading the text I had the impression that the emphasis is on Bootstrap,
> > not on Patternfly. It seems that we created patternfly because of
> > bootstrap, and not because of the need for design commonality. Is that
> > what you want to communicate?
> > 
> > If so, it’s perfect. If not, you just need to invert the order of the
> > sentences, e.g: "Creating a common UI across projects using Bootstrap”,
> > and start the text talking about patternfly and the need for commonality,
> > quoting Bootstrap later.
> > 
> > Hope that makes sense.
> > 
> > Gabriel
> > 
> > 
> > On May 27, 2014, at 10:46 AM, Robb Hamilton <rhamilto at redhat.com> wrote:
> > 
> >> https://etherpad.mozilla.org/vCVGboq5gM
> > 
> > ---
> > Gabriel Cardoso
> > User Experience Designer @ Red Hat
> > 
> 
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